Western media has a lot of sympathetic villains, to the point that it’s become a joke on YouTube. You can do a brief search and find videos parodying how modern villains always seem to have a tragic backstory and writers bend over backwards to excuse the terrible actions of their antagonists.
Despite the fact some people are getting tired of this trend, I think there’s still a place for writing sympathetic villains. Here are the five principles I use when writing sympathetic villains in my novels. Spoilers ahead for book one of Loyalty Fallen and book two of the Mistborn trilogy by Brandon Sanderson.
1. Create an anti-villain
You’ve probably heard of an anti-hero, which is basically a character that does the right things for selfish or incorrect reasons. An anti-villain, on the other hand, is a character that has altruistic end goals but uses villainous means to achieve those goals. As long as the end goals are relatable to the reader, the villain will end up being sympathetic, at least to some extent.
For example, in Loyalty Fallen, Illian has two main goals, which are to eradicate slavery, and to help his country recover from a devastating war. Despite the fact he uses evil means at times to reach those goals, the reader naturally agrees with the final result.
2. Contrast with pure villainy
My principle for most of the novels I write is to have at least one villain the readers love to love, and at least one villain the readers love to hate.
In Loyalty Fallen, Illian does some pretty terrible things. It’s implied that he helped arrange the false accusations against Kathryn and the assassination of her husband to remove any threat she might present to his position in the future. Also, despite knowing that Ren is not guilty of the assassination either, Illian tries to manipulate him into taking the blame to protect Kathryn.
At the same time, Illian’s villainy pales in comparison to Gregory, who is a war criminal and murdered his own brother. Also, Gregory chases Kathryn and Ren without remorse and expresses a wish to torture Ren, whereas Illian seems to have some regrets about the whole situation. This contrast aims to lead the readers to focus their hatred on Gregory instead of Illian.
3. Use circumstances beyond the villain’s control
If you want your villain to be sympathetic, make the descent into villainy gradual and a result of circumstances beyond the villain’s control.
For this portion, I’ll use an example from Brandon Sanderson’s second novel in the Mistborn trilogy, the Well of Ascension. Zane is a villain. He murders people regularly and tries to tempt Vin over to his side. When she refuses to give him her love, he tries to kill her.
Despite all of that, the reader still feels some sympathy for Zane. The initial reason is that Zane doesn’t seem to be in his right mind. He hears voices in his head that command him to kill (it is only later that the reader discovers this voice comes from Ruin and Zane isn’t crazy). Add to that the fact that Zane was a slave and was forced to work in the Pits of Hathsin, where he was heavily scarred, and the fact that Zane’s father raised him to be a weapon. Zane’s evil acts are clearly a tragic result of his upbringing and environment.
To emulate this, make the character’s circumstances or environment so bad that it would be more astonishing if they didn’t turn into a villain.
4. Show a slow descent
A negative character arc is defined as character growth in the wrong direction. In other words, a character gets worse and chooses to go the wrong way instead of the right way. Anikin Skywalker is a great example in the prequel Star Wars movies. He starts out altruistic but has a definite, prolonged fall into the dark side.
Making the descent into evil slow makes it seem more rational and understandable as opposed to making the reader feel blindsided. A reasonable villain tends to be more sympathetic.
5. Offer false hope of redemption
This is one of my personal favorites to read. When you see a character like Zane teetering between good and evil and the angel on that character’s shoulder is begging them to change for the better, the reader suddenly begins to imagine what that character could contribute by being on the protagonist’s side. Without even realizing it, most readers will feel what “could have been,” making the villain’s eventual fall into utter darkness all the more tragic.
Final thoughts
Sympathetic villains aren’t everyone’s favorite, but I think they have a definite place in fiction, as do the pure evil monsters that never gave redemption a thought. Hopefully this post helped you know how to write your own villain in a way that attracts sympathy.
Bonus: NaNoWriMo
As promised, I also wanted to give some information about the novel I’ll be writing for National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo), which is a one-month challenge to complete a 50,000-word novel in November. This will be my first year trying to complete NaNoWriMo, so we’ll see how it goes! As a note, I’m doing this separate from the actual NaNoWriMo organization due to the controversies it’s going through at the moment. This is just a personal challenge.
My plan is to write the next three blog posts introducing the overarching concept and synopsis, the three act story structure outline, and the magic system of the story, which I’m preparing ahead of time though I won’t start writing the actual novel until November 1st. If you want to read the novel without any spoilers after NaNoWriMo, you’ll want to skip those blog posts.
Here’s a little teaser for the upcoming novel:
Ashbranded
In the volcanic city of Ashwind Cairn, every spark of magic comes with a cost. For Dare, an ashbinder with a rare connection to the ash that fills their world, that cost may be his very soul. When he’s chosen to succeed the ruthless High Volcaryn, Dare is thrust into a deadly game of politics and power – one that could burn away everything he holds dear.
Assuming I can meet my NaNoWriMo goals, you’ll be able to read the novel in its entirety on December 1st. I’ll be giving daily or weekly updates on my progress. Until then, enjoy Loyalty Fallen, and see you next week!